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Thu Sep 22, 2011 11:55 am

The layout is fine, however some of the grammar used is terrible, especially for what seems to be an educational establishment?
completed in just couple of days
If you had to drop out of high school to help the family and have not finished your high school or because you just didn't think that the diploma was important and now, you are struggling to make ends meet, what do you do?
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Should be:
completed in just a couple of days
If you had to drop out of High School to help the family or because you just didnt think that a diploma was important at the time, now you are struggling to make ends meet, what do you do?
For further details contact us on
- don't put caps in where they aint necessary, if you're doing it for effect then capitalise every word; not just what seems to be random words.

... Just a couple of examples of things that could read better.

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